1. Wedding is usually a long awaited event and people breed vanity around it.
Wedding is usually a long awaited event and people make a big fuss over it. (“breed” means reproduce, so it does not suit.)
2. Moreover the groom and the bride are nervous about how the ceremony will be held because everybody prepares for this special day for a long time and spends a lot of effort and time on it.
In addition the groom and the bride are nervous about how the ceremony will be held because everybody prepares for this special day for a long time and spends a lot of effort and time on it. (“Moreover” is a conjunctive adverb which can not stand in the beginning of the sentence in academic writing.)
3. It is common knowledge that wedding dress is the main symbol of marriage ceremony.
It is common knowledge that the wedding dress is the main symbol of marriage ceremony. (Here we are talking about specific type of dress.)
4. If you see a lady in a white dress it will be clear that she is a bride.
If you see a lady in a white dress most people will assume that she is a bride. (Such phrase is more suitable.)
5. So girls are very responsible to the choice of their finery, they try to find something amazing and specific, as the wedding happens only ones.
So girls are very responsible for the choice of their finery, they try to find something amazing and specific, as the wedding happens only ones.
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