Презентация, доклад по английскому языку Правила написания сочинения-мнения (11 класс)

«Средняя общеобразовательная школа № 6 с углубленным изучением иностранных языков» г.Северодвинска

задачи – 3 балла

К2 – организация – 3 балла

К3 – лексика – 3 балла

К4 – грамматика – 3 балла

К5 – орфография и пунктуация – 2 балла

эссе «За и против» вместо требуемого «Мое мнение»)
неправильная интерпретация предложенной темы (подмена понятий, неоправданное расширение темы)
нераскрытие дискуссионного характера предложенной темы во введении
отсутствие перифраза или недостаточный перифраз предложенной темы во введении
несоответствие аргументации заявленному тезису
неправильное формирование контраргументов
лексико - грамматические и орфографические ошибки
логические ошибки
ошибки, связанные с нарушением нейтрального стиля (риторические вопросы, использование стяженных форм)

opinion? Do you agree with the statement?
Write 200-250 words.

Use the following plan:
make an introduction (state the problem paraphrasing the given statement)
express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons for your opinion
express an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for this opposing opinion
explain why you do not agree with the opposing opinion make a conclusion restating your position

of view

claim that they continue to gain in popularity and will substitute paper books while others disagree and think printed books will never disappear.

compact and can store a large number of books in their memory.
2) They meet people‘s special needs in case of allergy or reading disorders.
3) It is possible to download books quickly and for free.
4) They are environmentally-friendly as we do not need to cut down trees.
5) ……..

hands, touch their pages and feel their smell.
2) We can read more quickly on paper than on a computer screen.
3) They cannot be broken and do not need any batteries.
4) They do not emit any radiation, less harmful to eyesight.
5) ……..

и показать ЭТУ выбранную точку зрения в 2, 4, 5 абзацах - ваше мнение с аргументами, контраргумент к мнению окружающих, заключение.

books will take the upper hand over the printed books. First of all, e-books are more convenient to use because they are light, compact and can store a large number of books in their memory. As a result, students do not have to carry heavy bags packed with kilos of books. Secondly, they can be a wonderful option for people with special needs in case of poor eyesight, allergy or reading disorders. Thirdly, electronic readers are more environmentally-friendly as cutting down trees is not necessary for their development.

with me. They think that reading printed books are better for human eyes because the radiation coming from a computer screen of an electronic book can be dangerous. It causes eyestrain and leads to poor eyesight.

with this opinion because modern computer screens do not emit any radioactive rays. Besides, they allow us to read in low light conditions therefore e-books are even less harmful to eyes than traditional books.


causes problems with eyesight VS less harmful to eyes

electronic readers and printed books will coexist for years to come, but it is also possible that due to technological progress electronic gadgets can completely replace traditional paper books in the future.

people claim that they continue to gain in popularity and will substitute paper books while others disagree and think printed books will never disappear.
In my opinion, electronic books will take the upper hand over the printed books. First of all, e-books are more convenient to use because they are light, compact and can store a large number of books in their memory. As a result, students do not have to carry heavy bags packed with kilos of books. Secondly, they can be a wonderful option for people with special needs in case of poor eyesight, allergy or reading disorders. Thirdly, electronic readers are more environmentally-friendly as cutting down trees is not necessary for their production and development.
However, some people might disagree with me. They think that reading printed books are better for human eyes because the radiation coming from a computer screen of an electronic book can be dangerous. It causes eyestrain and leads to poor eyesight.
I strongly disagree with this opinion because modern computer screens do not emit any radioactive rays. Besides, they allow us to read in low light conditions therefore e-books are even less harmful to eyes than traditional books.
Taking everything into consideration, I believe that electronic readers and printed books will coexist for years to come, but it is also possible that due to technological progress electronic gadgets can completely replace traditional paper books in the future.

proper way, you will enjoy reading your essay both in an electronic book and in a printed one.